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apothecary 𖀓 moon made
August 12th, 2019 1:34:55am
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I've been dabbling in making graphics for about 4 months now and am not really sure about my techniques(?).Β 


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SO I'd like some feedback on my current projectΒ that I hope to make into my retirement page's layout image - if all goes well lol


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https://imgur.com/a/fUelGRr


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I know the dog is off but I have no clue how to fix it or where to start. I'm pretty happy with how the horse turned out but it could use some work as well.


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Any tips about graphic making in general is welcome!


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**I just realised I forgot to put the credits on the image - will do once I edit it again**


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August 12th, 2019 2:52:20am
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Β Both need shadows added, and I think part of the reason the dog looks wonky is bc it just fades into the grass. You might look into some grass brushes and put a couple "blades" in front of the dogΒ  to make it look a little more real, and I feel like that grass looks like it would be pretty deep too. It's a great start though and I'm eager to see how it turns out!

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Also, take my advice with a teensy grain of salt, I looked at this one my phone and idk if my connection is slow or what but i wasn't able to see a crisp image :/




 

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Maharet : Taking a break : BV, Blitz, & Trig watching
August 12th, 2019 2:57:08am
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to me the horse looks to big for the fence also its too "clean" with how grainy the "castle" is




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apothecary 𖀓 moon made
August 13th, 2019 12:53:25am
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depth is my worse enemy I swear lol

I'll update it after I mess with it some more.

Thanks you two!

Electric - quality is on my part (I think I got a little 'lost' when I was blurring)




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