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apothecary 𖤓 moon made
August 12th, 2019 1:34:55am
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I've been dabbling in making graphics for about 4 months now and am not really sure about my techniques(?). 


 


SO I'd like some feedback on my current project that I hope to make into my retirement page's layout image - if all goes well lol


 


https://imgur.com/a/fUelGRr


 


I know the dog is off but I have no clue how to fix it or where to start. I'm pretty happy with how the horse turned out but it could use some work as well.


 


Any tips about graphic making in general is welcome!


 


**I just realised I forgot to put the credits on the image - will do once I edit it again**


 


 


 


 




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August 12th, 2019 2:52:20am
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 Both need shadows added, and I think part of the reason the dog looks wonky is bc it just fades into the grass. You might look into some grass brushes and put a couple "blades" in front of the dog  to make it look a little more real, and I feel like that grass looks like it would be pretty deep too. It's a great start though and I'm eager to see how it turns out!

 

Also, take my advice with a teensy grain of salt, I looked at this one my phone and idk if my connection is slow or what but i wasn't able to see a crisp image :/




 

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Maharet : Taking a break : BV, Blitz, & Trig watching
August 12th, 2019 2:57:08am
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to me the horse looks to big for the fence also its too "clean" with how grainy the "castle" is




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apothecary 𖤓 moon made
August 13th, 2019 12:53:25am
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depth is my worse enemy I swear lol

I'll update it after I mess with it some more.

Thanks you two!

Electric - quality is on my part (I think I got a little 'lost' when I was blurring)




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