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𝒥ax ♡ wants your htix! support project NEON! ♡
December 6th, 2019 3:42:35pm
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Hi, y'all! I recently got back into photomanipulations (throwback to GIMP when I was a kid--that's what started my design career tbh :P) and I would love some feedback on my latest piece.


https://i.imgur.com/ceGoq0r.png


Things I struggle with: light/shadows, finding a style for illustrating hair


Any feedback and suggestions is greatly appreciated! :D Also, fantasy type subjects like this are my favorite, but would there be any interest in premades? 


Thanks :] 




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Concourse [but as she was leaving, it felt like breathing] UPPIE RESERVED
December 6th, 2019 6:28:33pm
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Freaking amazing!!!!! Def interested in premade. Is that one sold?!




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Kaly :: Learnin' to fly, but I ain't got wings.
December 6th, 2019 7:46:59pm
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Oh my word.... um the only thing and I mean only thing I notice is on horns there is more lighting hitting than the hair and face close by. The difference is very slight however. All in all this pic is drool worthy and when you are taking orders and I can afford I'll be messaging.




 

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DOUNIA | Al Kabir Arabians
December 6th, 2019 8:18:31pm
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Jax is amazing *hugs my layout*
Loving the fantasy themed ponies :) Royal snow fam!




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𝒥ax ♡ wants your htix! support project NEON! ♡
December 7th, 2019 12:38:25pm
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Ah thanks everyone!! 


Concourse: You're so kind! This one has not been sold yet! I wanted to get some crit before posting it up in auctions :) 


Kaly: You're totally right, I see what you mean. Thank you!! 


Kismet: *big hugs* I've been meaning to message you--the layout looks sooo good! I love what you did with it! :D 




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mango 🍑 stay your pretty eyes on course
December 8th, 2019 2:28:45am
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Ugh i love your style, and this one is particularly striking with the light :D I can't do light manips to save my life xD


My only critique would be with the mane/tails - overall, they're absolutely A killer. I adore the style, shading, depth, smoothness, definition. That said, I think there needs to be loose flyaway hairs that don't conform the normal twists/curls/strands/ends :D Just kinda lightly throw single hairs along the edges of those curls, or towards the ends of the hair. Follow the general flow of that piece of mane/tail but drag it out past the others so it "flies away" from the main mass - keep the brush small so it looks like it's only one piece of hair (and use a brighter color (i mean, pretty much plain white) since light will shine through the single flyaway strands) ^^ In my opinion, it'll add to the realism of hair that's already stellar :D




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𝒥ax ♡ wants your htix! support project NEON! ♡
December 9th, 2019 4:15:03pm
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wow thank you so much mango! for both your kind words and amazing advice! :D




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