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BANNED
February 9th, 2013 11:56:27pm
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tips and hints ?


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Oblivion
February 10th, 2013 12:17:39am
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I would firstly suggest adding more of a warming tone to the horse, needs more of a yellow-ish tone to it to match with the background. A shadow would look nice aswell as the lighting is bright enough that there should be a hint of a shadow. ;) the mane and tail look very good, I would maybe add some faint yellow streaks in their where its not so thick, like towards the ends. Oh, and a yellow-ish glow just around the edges of the horse where the light from the background is going to hit the opposite side of the horse! Otherwise it looks good! (:


 

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February 10th, 2013 2:00:48am
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awesome thanks so much!!!!


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February 10th, 2013 2:19:44am
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any more, i tryed (to my best ability) what Oblivion said


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lachlan fuhsaz. belgian malinois
February 13th, 2013 4:26:29pm
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It's really pretty! I like the concept and the stock choice.There's a few things, however. The horse is too big for the background - unless you wanted it to be a really big horse - look at the distance from the foreground to the background trees for tips on subject size. I think it could do with being quite a bit smaller, if possible.The mane is absolutely stunning.


 

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