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 Oblivion February 12th, 2013 4:08:58pm 2 Posts |
So this is my very first commission on DA! The orderer wants something like a fairytale, very warm tones, etc. if you know what i'm getting at here! xD So far I've come up with this: http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/1971/commmu.png I would absolutely love it if you would please point out every single little flaw, detail, just whatever to me. RIP IT TO PIECES LIKE LITERALLY!! I need this to be the best I can possibly get!! Thanks! (: |
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BANNED February 13th, 2013 5:39:54am 12 Posts |
Wow its great maybe darken the right (your right) back leg its a lil hard to make out wats oing on and it makes the front left leg look a lil funny but great work the lotto is my motto |
lachlan fuhsaz. belgian malinois February 13th, 2013 4:03:58pm 27 Posts |
It's really good! The lighting works well and the pictures fit nicely together.Don't pay much attention to this because I'm really not very good at giving critiques out. Sorry! But I'll try to help.Like Cane said, the back leg needs to be a lot darker than it is. The horse might benefit from being a little darker too, as the light is behind the horse, it would make the front of the subject darker than the background, only slightly, however. I think also, that the shadow should be moved slightly forward, it's not really on an angle whereas the light is sort of diagonal. You might have to draw some hooves on the horse, for the front and back leg where these isn't any in the picture, considering the floor of the forest is relatively flat and wouldn't create that much mess to cover the hooves up that much. If possible, you should also try to darken the right side of the horse up a bit. The light is very focused in this. Possibly the left ear, too. Did you blur the lighting you added on the horses legs etc because it looks very glow-y, and the edges look a bit sharp.I hope that helped a little. |
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