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Concourse [I'll rise up, I'll rise unafraid]
July 13th, 2015 7:50:07pm
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I worked hard on this, but I'm having a hard time selling it.


 


http://concoursehp.deviantart.com/art/Husky-Waterfall-545471761


 


it's far from perfect, done with a laptop touch pad.


what needs to be improved? What do you think it's worth hpd-wise?




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Concourse [I'll rise up, I'll rise unafraid]
July 14th, 2015 1:27:35am
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bumping for myself... hope this is allowed.




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𝔫𝔶𝔱𝔪𝔞𝔯𝔢 💫 。・:*˚:✧。
July 14th, 2015 1:38:43am
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I honestly think that is beautiful. Maybe add a shadow under the wolf and under his paws to make it seem like he's more on the ground? I'm no expert, but that's just one thing I can think of :) 




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Concourse [I'll rise up, I'll rise unafraid]
July 14th, 2015 1:44:00am
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I have the autobuy set at 10 million.

Is that too much? too little? just right?

It STILL hasn't sold. :(




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Freespin - Retirement
July 14th, 2015 2:18:32am
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I agree about adding a shadow. Apart from that I think it's gorgeous!  I think it's a steal for 10mill! A lot of mine are having little to no interest at the moment in auctions to. Unsure why...




 

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Concourse [I'll rise up, I'll rise unafraid]
July 14th, 2015 2:28:53am
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under all four paws, or just the one that's lifted up?




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𝔫𝔶𝔱𝔪𝔞𝔯𝔢 💫 。・:*˚:✧。
July 14th, 2015 2:33:44am
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Freespin probably knows better than I do - but I would do it under all four paws and kinda the middle lightly under his belly. And a lighter shadow under the one that's lifted up. And I agree, $10 million for that is a total steal. That's very well done, Concourse.




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Insomnia • [34] ⸸ Spare
July 14th, 2015 2:54:06am
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If I bred huskies still I'd buy it. :)




 

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Freespin - Retirement
July 14th, 2015 3:01:05am
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Deviantart has some great shadow tutorials.  Go and have a look there for some ideas on how it should be done =)




 

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fireflii
July 14th, 2015 12:20:52pm
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On mobile. Maybe mess around with the lighting? The left side of the manip is dark and the right side is light. It almost makes it look like the husky is slapped on. Play around with making it lighter? You could also add smidgen of a blurred, lower opacity glow around the husky? I would link an example, but I'm in a rush. :X Otherwise it's very well cut out, and I agree a shadow would help (try that first, could make it look better without the lighting change?).




 

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