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halo
March 18th, 2013 2:09:01am
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I had a lot of fun making this one; I've never done anything like it before, so it was a challenge!

http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/076/d/7/merhorse_by_halodesigns-d5yelci.png

Lay it on me, don't be afraid to hurt my feelings. I want your honest opinion on what I can do to make it better.


 


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lachlan fuhsaz. belgian malinois
March 18th, 2013 6:01:50am
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This is really, really beautiful!

I thought it would be easier if I done it on the image, though. So here you go. I hope it helps!


There's probably a few spelling mistakes on it because it's 6 am and I didn't read through it again after I'd written it. :33


 

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Master Administrator Samantha - see page to know who to contact directly!
March 18th, 2013 3:58:08pm
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This is really pretty! :).I just wanted to tell you that, haha, I don't have any helpful critique other than that on the left side of the neck it looks like there's some highlighting/uneven cutting where it should theoretically be in shadow.


 

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halo
March 18th, 2013 8:21:14pm
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Thank you both!I've went through and added some stuff...How does it look now? http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/077/1/6/merhorse___updated__by_halodesigns-d5yelci.png


 

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lachlan fuhsaz. belgian malinois
March 19th, 2013 12:22:55am
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It's stunning! The fish are maybe a bit big, but it really is beautiful and the colouring is lovely. :]


 

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halo
March 19th, 2013 12:50:39am
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Thank you! Couldn't have done it without your help :)


 

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Master Administrator Samantha - see page to know who to contact directly!
March 19th, 2013 12:52:20am
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That looks incredible :).


 

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