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Syn•Greyhounds
May 8th, 2013 4:33:14pm
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Hello my lovly fellow Horse Phenomena friends c; I've been sorta lurking,on and off of the website and decided I should see what you guys think of my manipulations and if you would be interested in them. Take a look!

http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2013/125/6/b/art_trade__by_barbhlgraphics-d645yzg.png
http://th04.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/123/5/9/traveling_alone_by_barbhlgraphics-d63z0de.png
http://th06.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/117/d/5/evening_sunset_by_barbhlgraphics-d6365h1.png


 


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BANNED
May 8th, 2013 6:26:52pm
5 Posts
You have potential :) I would suggest not smudging the horses so much--it makes them look blurry and out of focus. When I smudge (if I do at all), I copy the layer the horse is on. Then, with a hard brush at about 12% strength, I smudge all over the horse. Then I mess with the opacity and get it to look right, so it's a mix between smudged horse and non-smudged horse.


 

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Midnight Velvet Friesians
May 8th, 2013 7:09:22pm
123 Posts
Looks good to me.


 

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BANNED
May 8th, 2013 8:02:39pm
168 Posts
I love the first one. You interested in selling it?


 

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Syn•Greyhounds
May 8th, 2013 8:20:56pm
8 Posts
It was an art trade for somebody :/ So I'm afraid I cant sell it,it was only used as an example sadly. Everything else on my DA is pretty much okay for offers! Thank you guy's for the replies


 

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uni
May 8th, 2013 8:27:49pm
1,338 Posts
Looks pretty good! Only thing is, make sure you're doing your credits properly. For DA stock, it should read stockartist.deviantart.com, not @ deviantart


 

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M a e
May 8th, 2013 10:09:45pm
50 Posts
I love the first and third one.


 

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