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g r i m o i r e - paints!
January 14th, 2018 10:26:16pm
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So I would just like to know how I can improve my graphics. Take a look at the links below and let me know what you think of them, please and thank you!


 


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Any help is appreciated.




 


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g r i m o i r e - paints!
January 15th, 2018 1:44:37am
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Bumpity!




 

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Administrator blitz 🪦 truly devious [every day i'm shufflin']
January 15th, 2018 3:49:59am
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I think they're really good!

 

Only critique I'd have is the shadow under the lion on the first one doesn't look "real", if that makes sense!




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g r i m o i r e » vote for Tarot!
January 15th, 2018 9:14:01am
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Thanks! 

 

Hmmm, what do you think I could do to improve it?




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tana ;; gone
January 15th, 2018 9:21:09am
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I agree about the shadow of the lion. I personally think it could be a little bit blurrier along the edges and the tail shadow is too thick in comparison to the actual tail. I think the front of the shadow should come closer to the front paws, too.




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primrose •• creepin' ♥
January 15th, 2018 9:32:24am
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what tana said. Shadow should begin from the paws. To give it that realistic look. 

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like this photo. The actual shadow matches the the "base" of the animal, aka the foot. And varies on light source and intensity. :) dA should have great tutorials also.




 

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g r i m o i r e - paints!
January 15th, 2018 9:50:57am
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Okay, is this one better? BOOP!




 

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primrose •• creepin' ♥
January 15th, 2018 9:52:50am
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much! Great job :)




 

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tana ;; gone
January 15th, 2018 9:53:06am
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I think so, but wait for answers from Peike and other artists who are better than me xD




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g r i m o i r e - paints!
January 15th, 2018 9:54:09am
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Thanks everyone! I appreciate all the help I can get ha ha ha




 

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mero;: } bye felicia 👋
January 15th, 2018 7:54:44pm
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I find what helps a lot with shadows is remembering that the further something is from the ground, the lighter a shadow it will leave! So shadows will usually be darker/more defined near the feet/legs/whatever is touching the ground and softer/fuzzier for things like tails and body masses. Of course this depends on light source direction and stregth, but it's something to think of! :)




 

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Wolfhart || Have a happy new year!
January 18th, 2018 3:10:39pm
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Those all look great! You are very talented! How do you do your text like the last one where its like transparent but outlined?




 

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g r i m o i r e - paints!
January 20th, 2018 6:44:46pm
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Wolfhart: I set the text to overlay and then use the stroke feature!




 

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Saturniaᛉ moving to NC 🤩 - thank you for your votes!!
January 26th, 2018 4:41:42pm
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I honestly love your graphics! I think they are fabulous! 




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g r i m o i r e - paints!
January 26th, 2018 5:10:17pm
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 Awwww thanks Saturnia! That makes me so happy to hear!




 

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