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g r i m o i r e - paints! January 14th, 2018 10:26:16pm 99 Posts |
So I would just like to know how I can improve my graphics. Take a look at the links below and let me know what you think of them, please and thank you!
Any help is appreciated. |
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g r i m o i r e - paints! January 15th, 2018 1:44:37am 99 Posts |
Bumpity! |
blitz 🪦 truly devious [every day i'm shufflin'] January 15th, 2018 3:49:59am 6,136 Posts |
I think they're really good!
Only critique I'd have is the shadow under the lion on the first one doesn't look "real", if that makes sense! |
g r i m o i r e » vote for Tarot! January 15th, 2018 9:14:01am 128 Posts |
Thanks!
Hmmm, what do you think I could do to improve it? |
tana ;; gone January 15th, 2018 9:21:09am 13,574 Posts |
I agree about the shadow of the lion. I personally think it could be a little bit blurrier along the edges and the tail shadow is too thick in comparison to the actual tail. I think the front of the shadow should come closer to the front paws, too. |
primrose •• creepin' ♥ January 15th, 2018 9:32:24am 2,687 Posts |
what tana said. Shadow should begin from the paws. To give it that realistic look.
like this photo. The actual shadow matches the the "base" of the animal, aka the foot. And varies on light source and intensity. :) dA should have great tutorials also. |
g r i m o i r e - paints! January 15th, 2018 9:50:57am 99 Posts |
Okay, is this one better? BOOP! |
primrose •• creepin' ♥ January 15th, 2018 9:52:50am 2,687 Posts |
much! Great job :) |
tana ;; gone January 15th, 2018 9:53:06am 13,574 Posts |
I think so, but wait for answers from Peike and other artists who are better than me xD |
g r i m o i r e - paints! January 15th, 2018 9:54:09am 99 Posts |
Thanks everyone! I appreciate all the help I can get ha ha ha |
mero;: } bye felicia 👋 January 15th, 2018 7:54:44pm 4,681 Posts |
I find what helps a lot with shadows is remembering that the further something is from the ground, the lighter a shadow it will leave! So shadows will usually be darker/more defined near the feet/legs/whatever is touching the ground and softer/fuzzier for things like tails and body masses. Of course this depends on light source direction and stregth, but it's something to think of! :) |
Wolfhart || Have a happy new year! January 18th, 2018 3:10:39pm 23 Posts |
Those all look great! You are very talented! How do you do your text like the last one where its like transparent but outlined? |
g r i m o i r e - paints! January 20th, 2018 6:44:46pm 99 Posts |
Wolfhart: I set the text to overlay and then use the stroke feature! |
Saturniaᛉ moving to NC 🤩 - thank you for your votes!! January 26th, 2018 4:41:42pm 3,536 Posts |
I honestly love your graphics! I think they are fabulous! |
g r i m o i r e - paints! January 26th, 2018 5:10:17pm 99 Posts |
Awwww thanks Saturnia! That makes me so happy to hear! |
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